Okay, so this may be the most adorable chapter you've written yet. Like, things are a whole lot cuter now that Logan's more on board, definitely. Logan initiating a kiss with James and then James making him do it again... I couldn't stop smiling. Though that makes me nervous because things are going so well. Especially because both the Gustavo scene and the Mrs. Knight thing got me nervous for a little bit, considering every time up to now when things start to get really good, something happens, ie. Logan falls or whatever.

There's basically a lot in this chapter that made me super happy, Kendall definitely not being the least of them. I was incredibly happy to see him stand up for Logan and James. He never ceases to make me proud in this fic and while I love every moment Logan and James end up alone together, I can't get enough of how you write Kendall. He's so perfect. Well, I mean... everyone is perfect. Like, I know I've told you before, but you write dialogue so well and that's always my favorite part. And it's so hard for me to organize my praise... I wish I could just go on forever. But if I tried to tell you everything I love, I would just end up reading this whole chapter out loud to you.

In short, this chapter was really cute... I'm really looking forward to the play. I know there's some things before that, but I'm itching for this play. I'm just very excited to see where things go from that.

So I still don't redact my proclamation of love.