kkjkajdkasdkasfasjdklajakja soooooo friggen CUTE *spazzes and implodes*
Okay okay I was going to completely squeal all over you in chat after I read the notes at the beginning of this story so I'll just say it here. This is pure irony at work. Irony! See, just yesterday I was going through my old docs and IM conversations (it was how I found that story Jamie wrote I mentioned earlier) and one of the conversations I stumbled across was between myself and Jamie regarding an idea for doing a TxN fic that documents their relationshi in a series of snap-shots, with just small, several hundred word long "moments" written out to show their relationship developments. It was just a random conversation and an idea that never went anywhere though, but when I read the log a part of me went, "damn, I really wish I could see that now" because the appeal for that kind of story hadn't faded one bit. And then, I see this post and your notes and I am just tickled pink by the irony and the coincidence of the whole situation :D
But on to the story! Gah so good! So cute! So in character!! *___* You got Tuti down so well, and Nagayan, I can just picture that thinking, work-type pout on his face while he taps a pencil and thinks :3 You did a great job keeping them in the right place, the right mindset, the right reactions to the words they were saying, and I have to say I loved the dialogue, especially at the end there. Nagayan trying to distract Tuti from inflicting his bad fashion sense with sex, I loved it XDD
I can't wait to see where you're going with this or what ideas you might get for showing the various stages of their relationship ♥ I can say from personal experience that this method of storytelling can be very rewarding and a lot of fun, because it gives the author the chance to explore so many things within the same amount of space. Really, really great idea here, I couldn't have thought of one better myself XD
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Date: 2007-02-25 09:05 am (UTC)Okay okay I was going to completely squeal all over you in chat after I read the notes at the beginning of this story so I'll just say it here. This is pure irony at work. Irony! See, just yesterday I was going through my old docs and IM conversations (it was how I found that story Jamie wrote I mentioned earlier) and one of the conversations I stumbled across was between myself and Jamie regarding an idea for doing a TxN fic that documents their relationshi in a series of snap-shots, with just small, several hundred word long "moments" written out to show their relationship developments. It was just a random conversation and an idea that never went anywhere though, but when I read the log a part of me went, "damn, I really wish I could see that now" because the appeal for that kind of story hadn't faded one bit. And then, I see this post and your notes and I am just tickled pink by the irony and the coincidence of the whole situation :D
But on to the story! Gah so good! So cute! So in character!! *___* You got Tuti down so well, and Nagayan, I can just picture that thinking, work-type pout on his face while he taps a pencil and thinks :3 You did a great job keeping them in the right place, the right mindset, the right reactions to the words they were saying, and I have to say I loved the dialogue, especially at the end there. Nagayan trying to distract Tuti from inflicting his bad fashion sense with sex, I loved it XDD
I can't wait to see where you're going with this or what ideas you might get for showing the various stages of their relationship ♥ I can say from personal experience that this method of storytelling can be very rewarding and a lot of fun, because it gives the author the chance to explore so many things within the same amount of space. Really, really great idea here, I couldn't have thought of one better myself XD