Okay, so... I'm really terrible for not commenting earlier. I don't know why I havent' either, because generally, I'm really good about commenting- especially on fic I really like. But like- idk, I almost thought that something this awesome wouldn't get updated? I would start craving it too much and then get no pay off? Bottom line: I WAS WRONG.
I am such a hard-core fan of you and this pairing and your writing, true story dude. I love how in-character everyone is and how tangible Logan and James' relationship is (all the boys' relationships with each other, actually) and how you paint such an adorable picture of James craving Logan's attention and Logan wanting James so badly, neither of them really understanding why.
The pact was a brilliant way to set up the story with a note of believability so when they finally got to the point of actually kissing, it wasn't contrived at all. Like- okay, I don't only read fic for the credibility and plausible-ness, because that's setting the standard kind of high in a fandom made of up a lot of young people and new writers (there are some FABULOUS writers with us, though). BUT. It does always add to a fic when show!verse canon is not only taken into consideration, but put into action, and it's the mark of a good fanfiction writer when both are done. And you? Make my dreams come true with this thing.
I can not tell you how many times I've tried to explain James and Logan's OTP-ness and it's validity in the way that this story has done effortlessly. I'm honestly surprised that you're semi-new to fandom, because you write the boys' personalities on point. Your Kendall is perfectly stubborn and leaderly and your Carlos is adorable and only partially oblivious while remaining intuitive as well (you give him credit where most people do not, is what I'm saying). And of course, your James and Logan are accurately vain and confused, respectively. The layers you add to them are immaculate and perfect and I am devolving into one giant keysmash of emotions over here.
So like, keep writing. Please. Pretty Please. You are my James/Logan fic-writing soulmate. <3
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Date: 2011-10-11 04:35 am (UTC)I am such a hard-core fan of you and this pairing and your writing, true story dude. I love how in-character everyone is and how tangible Logan and James' relationship is (all the boys' relationships with each other, actually) and how you paint such an adorable picture of James craving Logan's attention and Logan wanting James so badly, neither of them really understanding why.
The pact was a brilliant way to set up the story with a note of believability so when they finally got to the point of actually kissing, it wasn't contrived at all. Like- okay, I don't only read fic for the credibility and plausible-ness, because that's setting the standard kind of high in a fandom made of up a lot of young people and new writers (there are some FABULOUS writers with us, though). BUT. It does always add to a fic when show!verse canon is not only taken into consideration, but put into action, and it's the mark of a good fanfiction writer when both are done. And you? Make my dreams come true with this thing.
I can not tell you how many times I've tried to explain James and Logan's OTP-ness and it's validity in the way that this story has done effortlessly. I'm honestly surprised that you're semi-new to fandom, because you write the boys' personalities on point. Your Kendall is perfectly stubborn and leaderly and your Carlos is adorable and only partially oblivious while remaining intuitive as well (you give him credit where most people do not, is what I'm saying). And of course, your James and Logan are accurately vain and confused, respectively. The layers you add to them are immaculate and perfect and I am devolving into one giant keysmash of emotions over here.
So like, keep writing. Please. Pretty Please. You are my James/Logan fic-writing soulmate. <3